Audience feedback for my double page spread;
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"Good title, I'd read it"
"I like it, the article is interesting and funny"
"I really like the colours in the photo, the band look really good"
"Good use of colour throughout the article"
"I like the colour scheme and layout, and I love the extra bit about each band member"
"The article is really fun to read and makes you want to read more"
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"The page looks a bit too white"
"The text is quite blocky and not divided up"
"You could add page numbers"

Good work Amber, but maybe you can comment on how you feel about this? Maybe talk about how you are glad you made the changes you did.
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